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I see you sitting there,
Looking so smug in that chair,
A smirk upon your face,
Thinking you’ve put me in my place.

Your eyes they laugh at me,
Scorning me for all to see,
You may think that you have won,
But the battle has only just begun.

Get out, get out,
Get out of my bed,
Shouldn’t have, shouldn’t have,
Believed what you said,
Shoved these, shoved these,
Thoughts into my head.
Just leave me alone!
Please, oh please, just leave me alone…

It always pleased you to beat me down,
Intimidating me with that dark frown,
Shoved my face in your glorious victory,
With you I can never, ever be free.

You thought that you had gained a hold,
But in this thought you were too bold,
Although I have to admit, I must say,
That I, as well, used to think this way.

Get out, get out,
Get out of my bed,
Shouldn’t have, shouldn’t have,
Believed what you said,
Shoved these, shoved these,
Thoughts into my head.
Just leave me alone!
Please, oh please, just leave me alone…

Never again will I be mislead,
From now on I’ll watch where I tread,
You crumbled my trust, I won’t forget,
What you did, I’ll get you for yet.

I am much more than I appear,
Apparently to you this was not clear,
I can move on, I must, I will,
Through shattered love I’ll live on still.

Get out, get out,
Get out of my bed,
Shouldn’t have, shouldn’t have,
Believed what you said,
Shoved these, shoved these,
Thoughts into my head.
Just leave me alone!
Please, oh please, just leave me alone…

You don’t see the damaged you’ve done,
And it’s like you do this just for fun,
But you did teach me one thing, this is true:
To never, ever give myself to people like you.

Never again....

Wednesday September 7th, 2005
©2005-2009 ~Nightfeather
:iconnightfeather:

Author's Comments

Wrote this out of nowhere... dunno how good it is *shrugs*

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:iconpoetintheshower:
i really like this. it's very powerful and has a very serious message. the repetition works really well and it's catchy and memorable. well done, i really enjoyed this.
:iconnightfeather:
Really? Well thank you :D
:iconrisingtide:
Great use of repatition here. Lovely poem.

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"I know what it's like to want to die. How it hurts to smile. How you try to fit in but you cant. How you hurt yourself on the outside to try to kill the thing on the inside."
:iconnightfeather:
lol and here I thought that it wouldn't be that great cuz it was one of those spur of the moment poems :p Thank you :D

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